Sample of Pursuasive Messages (Managerial Communication)

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Worldcommect Language Services

Memphis,Tennessee

Tel:

Sept 17, 2020

Ms. Melinda Sparks

Chairperson

Solidarity Investment Company

Nashville,Tennessee

Dear Ms. Sparks:

Yesterday,I attended Entrepreneur's Lunch Forum and I got the chance to listen to your speech.After listening to all the angel investors,I somehow feel you have an eye for an entrepreneur.While other angel investors are busy talking highly of technology,you gave a ray of hope for entrepreneurs like me.I am delighted to tell you that I met all the criteria you mentioned.

I have a startup,Worldconnect Language Service,doing really well.We,in Worldconnect Language Services,provide services like editing,translation and interpreting.As there are very few language services available in our state,I feel the need to establish one to provide all language related services under one roof.We are in a nascent stage to say this but we can go a long way if we match client's expectations with our services.I am planning to open new branch offices in other cities around the southeast.

We are extending our services to new cities because our Memphis office was booked to capacity.There are so many international business professionals seeking our services due to to which it is obvious for us to extend.For this,we need one-time infusion of cash.We would be extremely happy and fortunate at the same time,if you could be of help.

I know it is difficult for you take decision on this matter on the basis of mere one letter.If we can meet,I will present my business plan in more detail so that you can get any information you wanna get.Please let me know whenever you are free.I will show up.

Thank you again for your time.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

राजेन्द्र

Rajendra Bhandari

Founder

Worldconnect Language Services

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To: All guitar players

From: Rajendra Bhandari

Subject: About a Forgotten Musical Instrument,Oud

Dear All Guitar Players:

Have you ever heard the name of oud,a musical instrument?If you have heard and want to try your hands at Oud,this message could be beneficial for you.

The Oud is a short-neck lute-type,pear-shaped stringed instrument usually with 11 strings grouped in 6 courses,with 10 or 13 strings respectively.It is very similar to modern lutes and also to western lutes.It is a popular musical instrument in many cultures from Northern Africa to Southwest Asia.This instrument can add to your musical richness.It can make your music feel lively.

I urge each one of you to try Oud and share your experiences with us.Those who try Oud feel they have the best time playing Oud.They tell us that it gives their music a broader range of sounds.Many of you have heard from our comapny before about this.

We wanna bring Oud into this market.It will be revolutionary in the field of music.I wanna appeal omce again to all of you to join our hands in this venture of ours to reintroduce a forgotten musical instrument.

Best regards

राजेन्द्र

Rajendra Bhandari

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Kansas City's Hangers Cleaners

Kansas,Missouri

Traditional dry cleaning can be harmful

- Rajendra Bhandari

Chemical used by traditional dry cleaners in our locality may harm human health.These chemicals are very hamful.People with diseases related to lungs,kidneys,liver and heart will be more prone to these harmful chemicals.

Traditional dry cleaning requires special environmental permits and monitoring by government agencies.As an alternative to traditional dry cleaning,we,at Kansas City's Hangers Cleaners,bring new dimension to dry cleaning business.We installed sophisticated and innovative machines which use safe liquid Carbon dioxide and specially developed detergents to clean clothes.

The process requires no heat which means synthetic cohesion used in clothes remain intact.We are extremely careful for the health of employees and environment too.Therefore,this process does not require the toxic,combustible perchloroethylene which is normally used in conventional dry cleaning.

We recommend you all to use new service here at Kansas City's Hangers Cleaners.Definitely you will feel different and better.Its high time to boycott those traditional dry cleaning which has many haphazards for the customers,employees and environment.

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Rajendra Bhandari and Associates

Kirtipur,Kathmandu

E-mail:

Tel:

Sept 17, 2020

Dear clients:

As you all know we are the most dynamic and well-equipped audit firm and our performances in recent years suggest the same.In this fast paced world,what matters the most is performance combined with accountability and dignity.From next year onwards,we are going to offer new and exciting services along with internal and statutory audit services we are providing.So are you excited for the new services?

Competition is inevitable.Competition is perpetual.Those who accept the competition and prepared themselves for the world lasts long.Keeping that in mind,from next year onwards,along with our audit services we are in the process of offering accounting and consultancy services.If everything falls in place,you are going to get finest finacial services from us.We are in talks with some young minds,Chartered Accountants and consultants.As soon as the deal is finalised,we are gonna embark upon the odyssey of exciting financial services.One of our many goals is to grow together with our clients.

As our client ranges from hospitals to banks,finances to non-profit organizations,hotels to industries,we are delighted to have professionals from diverse fields.We operate within the framework of Nepal Financial Reporting Standards.

If you need any sort of financial services,we will be at your services.As in the past years,we will be extremely delighted to confirm our financial ties.Next year onwards,you gonna get more assured and transparent financial services from your long time auditing partner.

Sincerely,

राजेन्द्र

Rajendra Bhandari

Senior Partner

Rajendra Bhandari and associates